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PostSubject: James Lars   Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:06 am

Name:
James Lars
Age/birthday:
17/August 31st 1973
Gender:
Male
Years in camp:
5 years
Year Around or Summer:
Year Around
Brief History:[/b]
James started going to camp when he was around 12 years old. Around 14, he became a year round camper along with his younger brother when their parents were killed. He vowed to his brother to find their parents killer.
[b]Special Power:

Water Manipulation
Sub-Power (if needed):
Heightened Awareness
Describe Power(s):
His power involves controlling all three stages of water, and altering one into one of the other two.
Physical appearance:
James has short light brown hair with a few streaks of blonde. He always keeps it combed to the right. His eyes are olive green. He has a slight tan to his white skin. He is tall with some well defined muscles.
Personality:
Knowledgeable, Caring, and Shy are three words that describe James the best. He usually stays away from people; preferring to read books or watch movies. Though, he does like to play board games and strategy games like chess.
Pets:
None
Weapons:
None
Talents:
He has a talent for games, somehow managing to win most of the time.
Other:
James has a younger brother


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PostSubject: Re: James Lars   Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:13 am

I don't think I'm going to accept his power... because it's the same thing as Mind Control... and it's in the rare section.

++-Mind control- The ability to alter the perceptions of others, and general ability to control the actions of others with the mind.

Can you try finding a substitute, or something similar that doesn't seem so overbearing?

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~Ryan Johann 'RJ' Quan (18)~
Emotional Empath
~Silas Ravendale (18)~
Wizard
~Callie Madison 'Mad' Dawson (5)~
Superhuman Strength
~Ethan 'Hollywood' Sweetheart (20)~
Water Manip
~Nyssa 'Nyx' James (CL:Mentals-18)~
Technopath
~Aerilyn Rivera (20)~
Substance Shifter
~Harmony 'Crazy' Young (16)~
Duplication
~Paisley "Lenny" Lennox (16)~
Light Manip and Phaser
~Landon Morgan (CL: Undies-18)~
Undetermined

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PostSubject: Re: James Lars   Thu Nov 25, 2010 1:17 pm

I would like to respectably argue that it is not mind control; he can't tell someone what to do. All he can do is trick them by manipulating their senses. His power also has a major flaw; he can really only effect one person at a time.

I personally think Mind-control is a vary broad power. It can be taken in many different directions. True mind control is something like Professor Xavier.
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PostSubject: Re: James Lars   Thu Nov 25, 2010 1:37 pm

The ability to alter the perceptions of others...

When you manipulate someone else like that, it's a rare power and it is not allowed unless you are a CL or an active member.

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~Ryan Johann 'RJ' Quan (18)~
Emotional Empath
~Silas Ravendale (18)~
Wizard
~Callie Madison 'Mad' Dawson (5)~
Superhuman Strength
~Ethan 'Hollywood' Sweetheart (20)~
Water Manip
~Nyssa 'Nyx' James (CL:Mentals-18)~
Technopath
~Aerilyn Rivera (20)~
Substance Shifter
~Harmony 'Crazy' Young (16)~
Duplication
~Paisley "Lenny" Lennox (16)~
Light Manip and Phaser
~Landon Morgan (CL: Undies-18)~
Undetermined

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PostSubject: Re: James Lars   Thu Nov 25, 2010 1:53 pm

Alright, I will come up with a different power. Any suggestions?
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PostSubject: Re: James Lars   Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:09 pm

Erm, did you take a glance at the Powers List?

__________________________________________________


~Ryan Johann 'RJ' Quan (18)~
Emotional Empath
~Silas Ravendale (18)~
Wizard
~Callie Madison 'Mad' Dawson (5)~
Superhuman Strength
~Ethan 'Hollywood' Sweetheart (20)~
Water Manip
~Nyssa 'Nyx' James (CL:Mentals-18)~
Technopath
~Aerilyn Rivera (20)~
Substance Shifter
~Harmony 'Crazy' Young (16)~
Duplication
~Paisley "Lenny" Lennox (16)~
Light Manip and Phaser
~Landon Morgan (CL: Undies-18)~
Undetermined

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PostSubject: Re: James Lars   Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:35 pm

Yeah, I told you in the Percy Jackson site that it was extensive.
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PostSubject: Re: James Lars   Thu Nov 25, 2010 7:13 pm

Alright, I edited his power.
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PostSubject: Re: James Lars   Thu Nov 25, 2010 7:47 pm

ACCEPTED!

Welcome to Camp Point!

James will be in Cabin 3 aka the EWEs. Your Cabin Leader is Persephone Manson.

__________________________________________________


~Ryan Johann 'RJ' Quan (18)~
Emotional Empath
~Silas Ravendale (18)~
Wizard
~Callie Madison 'Mad' Dawson (5)~
Superhuman Strength
~Ethan 'Hollywood' Sweetheart (20)~
Water Manip
~Nyssa 'Nyx' James (CL:Mentals-18)~
Technopath
~Aerilyn Rivera (20)~
Substance Shifter
~Harmony 'Crazy' Young (16)~
Duplication
~Paisley "Lenny" Lennox (16)~
Light Manip and Phaser
~Landon Morgan (CL: Undies-18)~
Undetermined

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